In modern days, one of the controversial changes related to that severe illegal acts are increasing day by day. Although some people strongly believe that the death penalty is much useful to stop serious crimes related kill, the rest of them think that using other methods is much better than it. In this essay, I am going to examine from both sides of view and represent a conclusion.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that capital punishment prevents from repeating serious crimes because most criminals continue activities of such illegal acts as robbery, treason and serial kills after finishing punishment. The primary reason for believing this is that in these cases, dying someone who is innocent frequently occurs. One important illustration of this is that robbery in 2015 February 14 in the US that was done by 2 armed brothers who convicted 3 times in prison killed three innocent people. After this movement, some civils of the US convinced recovering capital punishment.
On the other hand, it is argued that giving to criminals a chance to change is right. People often have this opinion because another way of punishment gives to them a lot of time to understand their sin. Furthermore, nowadays some prisons help to think about their fault by psychologists. A particularly good example is here is Mike Tyson, a famous boxer, 3 times convicted in prison when he was 16 years old and studied how to live right from prison. As a result, he has become the champion of the box.
In conclusion, this question is uneasy to discuss. On balance, however, I tend to believe that executions need to save human life although some criminals understand how to start life by new.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89679715302 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61982624821 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5478108374 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151589011804 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472693462414 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049912840784 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874208904403 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484790260156 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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