Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, others disagree with that. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
zoos remain popular places for people to visit for entertainment and to learn about wild animals. while some people believe that animal should be enclosed in zoo and others argue that should remain in natural habitats. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.
On the one hand, those who believe animal should put in enclosure might argue that it will restrict their locomotion movement. this is because such limitation don’t provide natural habitat. For example, Lion or leopard required large space for their movement by keeping them in cage we are not only restrict their action but also other skills to hunt for their choice of food is diminution. Eventually, it creates unnecessary stress on them. Moreover, zoo can serve a way to protect endangered species. Man y of species are facing dwindling number due the destruction of their territory or from disease.
On the other hand, my view is that animal ought to live in natural environment; the reason for this is that every organism on the Earth has equal rights and we cannot destroy for animals. Furthermore, they have natural tendency which they develop from living in the wild and pass down to their own offspring. In contrast, Human should create wild life sanctuary so animal can freely live there, which bringing people and animals together. For instant, wildlife safari provides potential to educate the public about conservation issues and inspire people to protect animals. As a result, tourism industry grows and money could be spent on animal welfare.
In conclusion, while zoo is efficient to guard endangered species, natural surrounding such as safari or sanctuary helps the animal to pass their skills to next generation, in my view, is paramount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0813559322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54818770057 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8493184246 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20276168372 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623581920374 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504500527697 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124113617917 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579935796136 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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