You have recently ordered an item through the internet,but are not happy with the purchase .write to the company.In your letter
-describe what you purchased
explain why you are not happy with the purchase
tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.
I want to bring to your kind attention, that I have ordered Omni brand kids bicycle vide order number 09731548 from your website on the 21st of April with special instructions to gift wrap. This was an impulsive buy as was scrolling the browser and i got attracted to this unique design and attractive price.
My point of concern is that as soon as i assembled it and gave it to my daughter for riding, the rear wheel started wobbling. Therefore, my daughter lost her balance and fell on the ground. All the excitement and fun just vanished from her face and I also feel dismayed. In addition to this, the help line number mentioned in your instructions manual was not reachable.
To make sure you do not lose your valuable customer, I will strongly suggest you to replace the bicycle with an upgraded version and get it delivered in next three days. You can arrange for the pickup of this faulty bicycle by tomorrow between 4 to 6 pm. Also, make sure this manufacturing defect is highlighted to your production team and a reasonable reply should reach me on my registered email-id.
your sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve buy as was scrolling the browser and i got attracted to this unique design and...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... My point of concern is that as soon as i assembled it and gave it to my daughter...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this faulty bicycle by tomorrow between 4 to 6 pm. Also, make sure this manufact...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... reach me on my registered email-id. your sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68205128205 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63693484524 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3802592136 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147717787784 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516891071542 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065491529734 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902474073192 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06831789291 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.