In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction, causing high levels of water and air pollution. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
With the rapid growth of industrialization and construction industry, water and air pollution are the major concerns for many developing countries. This essay will suggest the preventive measures to be taken such as modern technologies and enforcement of stringent law by the government.
One of the reasons for water pollution is a discharging of sewage water into the rivers and oceans without any treatment. The sewage water contains harmful bacteria which can bring a serious threat to the aquatic life. In an effort to prevent these issues, modern technologies like sewage water treatment plant can be used to treat sewage water for recycling and reuse the treated water for domestic purpose. This will not only reduce sewage disposal issues but also to solve the problem of water shortfalls. For example, developed countries like USA has an impeccable system which not only treats sewage water for disposal purpose, but also recycle in such a way that they can use this for water for normal domestic purpose. In other words, modern technologies ought to be used for reducing water pollution.
Besides, water, air has also some grave issues. One of the main reason for air pollution is a huge amount of debris generated from construction sites. The air pollution has not only affected flora and fauna, but also humans. In order to eradicate air pollution, the government must implement stringent environmental policies for construction sites. For example, to get an interim commencement certificate the developer must seek approval from environmental department, which regulates the air pollution level for construction sites. This will ensure that construction sites are not generating unwanted waste and preventive actions are being taken to alleviate air pollution. In short, stringent policies which regulates pollution levels at sites can help to reduce air pollution.
To conclude, advanced technologies and stern policies are necessary to prevent further deterioration of air and water quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44728434505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92465445668 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507987220447 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1661035999 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319133950059 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125723444884 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530320854419 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217668872715 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063008710007 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.