These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modren world, Individuals are connected to others with the help of Technology. I believe it that all phone and Internet is very useful for public to communicate socially.
In the Past time, Technology was not advanced. People faced many problems. At that time, It is difficult to communicate with others. It was very complicated to send and receive message. If some person send a message to others. They received a text after a week or month. But Now Technology is very advanced. Person use a cell phones and Internet. They send and receive message easily. There is no time lag between in this process as compare to past. Peoples are attached with the help of Internet in whole world. Persons make a new friends on some apps like facebook, Instagram. On these apps, they share a information about business or any Purpose. They Exchange a any kind of news in whole country. They spread a culture of any state or country among other citizens of different countries. For Examples, Foreign peoples are more intrested in Indian culture in these days. They ordered a Indian dresses online from some shopping apps or by a Person.
Furthermore, It is also useful to find any information regarding any places. companies. Students used a Internet app Google in the purpose of Education. They prepare a presentations by searching on Google about any topic or subject However, Every thing is useful and non-useful for Everyone. Internet has also harmful effects on Persons. It is very dangerous for anybody health. It also makes a mind dull as a result Individuals are totally depended on it. Skills are rusty as compared to recent times.
It is concluded that advantages has more overweigh than disadvantages dure to advanced technology.
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Suggestion: uses
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94880546075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76157937288 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1949104149 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.7037037037 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8518518519 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.14814814815 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133203629673 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036566033368 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459584331271 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854065934704 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305425803367 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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