Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Agree or disagree?
The 20th century has brought with It many advances, with these advances human lives have changed dramatically and also have been more complicated, in some way life becomes worse and in some way get better. There is broad consensus on this issue that life becomes more facilitate and people are happier. To be frank as far as I concerned, according to my personal experience I believe that people in current life are more despondent in compression with before, there seen to be the number of changes associated with this unsatisfactory and I would explore some of this changes which are more conspicuous for me in the following essay.
First and foremost, people in the past used to work out every single day while they were taking care of their corps in the field, Nevertheless, people nowadays have been become more laziness and they tend to live in sedentary lifestyle which causes deleterious effects on both society and individual’s life. For example, when I was in high school I went to basketball court every day but now I overwhelmed with my diurnal tasks and my job so I do not have spare time in order to go out and have fun which makes me more frustrated and makes me more impatient. And My personal experience would be a great example of these problems I could not appreciate my life and have fun from my life because tough of marriage and other neglect things have been preoccupied me recently.
There is another factor that deserves some word here is that people in past tended to eat healthier food such as vegetables and fruit which contributes healthier lifestyle and made people’s lives more delightful, However, people in these days due to their busy lifestyle have to eat junkier food and convenience food which is detrimental to human’s body. Statistics show that people who eat healthier food are more like to be happier and they enjoy their life, rather than people who do not eat this kind of thing.
Last but not least, kindness and high-quality behaviors have been eliminated from lives. To elucidate more, no one cares about other human beings who are in trouble and are in need of help. For example, people in Africa have been impoverished since centuries but still, they are poor and they do not have enough food and medicine showing everyone is implicated and all is because of a busy life. Feeling the sweetness of helping is a pure delight.
In summary, with all the aforementioned reason taken into account, due to the advance of technology people have become busier in compression with before, therefore, they could fully enjoy their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 564, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...atisfactory and I would explore some of this changes which are more conspicuous for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84684684685 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70034431638 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5484441121 48.9658058833 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.538461538 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1538461538 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181445117317 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679887563414 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504344311482 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108503073893 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383856058491 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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