The success of a country is often determined by their economic power.
Is this the most important factor? What other factors should be used to measure a country’s success?
It is true that the economic strength is considered as the most important indicator of nation’s success. I believe there are several other factors which are as equally important as economic power. This essay will discuss about these factors which contributes to the success of the nation.
It is agreed that without adequate economic condition the government will not be able to manage to run the nation and citizens will suffer. However, it will be meaningless if the country being economically strong fails to give basic minimum facilities to each citizens. Hence, the strength of economy is not only the most important factor for measuring success of the nation.
There are two major factors like quality of life of average citizen and poverty reduction which are also equally important parameters of successful country. An overall economic success does not always guarantees that this wealth is equally distributed about among all citizens and this means the wealth is in the hands of particular class of people. For instance, in developing countries like India, although its economy is considered as one of the strong economy, the corruption and exploitation still prevails due to which quality of average citizen is very low and 25% of citizens are below poverty line. In other words, the factors such as quality of life and success in reducing poverty are some of the factors which should also be considered equally important as strong economy.
In conclusion, although economic strength is one of the strong indicator to measure the success of any nation, there are other factors like quality life and poverty reduction which must be considered equally important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'guarantee'
Suggestion: guarantee
...verall economic success does not always guarantees that this wealth is equally distributed...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ife and success in reducing poverty are some of the factors which should also be considered...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22878228782 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66555045787 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468634686347 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0171618215 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367373840244 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166774242415 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771646359008 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24919214912 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580601557103 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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