Dear Mr. Steve,
With all the respect, I am writing this letter to inform to you about that I have planned to resign from my current position and have offering from the abroad company.
I have received a great opportunity for my future career and the company is one of the world's largest company. I need to inform them my answer within this week this is a precious opportunity I have been waiting since so long and have always desired to be associated with abroad company.
As much I am eager to face the next challenge in my life, I know I will look back often in appreciation of the many people that have helped me along the way and help me to enhance my knowledge and motivated me to achieve my goals.I want to say thank you for all the opportunities and experiences I have been afforded over the past four years.it was unforgettable and life changing experience for me in positive way. i will always remember all of the good things this company has gave me during my working period.
Further, I would request to you about a recommendation letter for my experience about the work and the period i have been work in here and I hope that my ability can leave a good contribution in this company.
I wish you all the best for the future and it has been a pleasure working with all of you.
Best regards,
Aprilia Stivani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...re career and the company is one of the worlds largest company. I need to inform them my answe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch I am eager to face the next challenge in my life, I know I will look back ofte...
^^
Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'back'.
Suggestion: often back
...allenge in my life, I know I will look back often in appreciation of the many people that...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ge and motivated me to achieve my goals.I want to say thank you for all the oppor...
^
Line 8, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ging experience for me in positive way. i will always remember all of the good th...
^
Line 8, column 419, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ging experience for me in positive way. i will always remember all of the good th...
^
Line 8, column 442, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...in positive way. i will always remember all of the good things this company has gave me du...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 482, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...all of the good things this company has gave me during my working period. Further...
^^^^
Line 16, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Best regards, Aprilia Stivani
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51836734694 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55444341775 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518367346939 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.872582453 44.8134815571 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.375 76.5299724578 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161666126793 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826403493133 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753195439555 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126657087228 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721957665454 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.