You had a good meal in local restaurant with your family. write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir,
To the Editor,
I am a old member which jointed in a local society and I make a latter about a reference to other people in country for one of many place. It name is The Lone Star Cape.
The lone Star Cape has many interesting property which can make me to be interested, such the décor and ambience. When I come for visiting, I am comfy in there. I think the cape is very good, because it have the server which gives server along with the size and quality of the portions. So, I get memorize which was most memorable.
The server was professional yet emulate and along with pure quantity of every food which served by waiter, inspired me to pass on my reference. I very enjoy when I eat a steak of mammoth proportion and a giant fresh, crisp salad accompanied by a choice of appropriately selected seasonal vegetables. Besides, The Lone Star Cape gives a service for visitor. They served visitor with giving dishes special which is delicious. It is Black Forest.
After I give my recommendation, hopefully potential customer will come in this great place. Thank you.
Yours truly
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It name is The Lone Star Cape.
Its name is The Lone Star Cape.
Sentence: When I come for visiting, I am comfy in there.
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I very enjoy when I eat ...
I enjoy very much when I eat ...
They served visitor with giving dishes special which is delicious.
They served visitor with giving special dishes which are delicious.
Sentence: I am a old member which jointed in a local society and I make a latter about a reference to other people in country for one of many place.
Error: jointed Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: When I come for visiting, I am comfy in there.
Error: comfy Suggestion: ?
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