The line graph compares the visitor arrival numbers of a specific country for a short trip, and the number of residents leaving for the same purpose, from October 2009 to June 2011.
Overall, the number of residents, who leave the country for short trips were much higher. Furthermore, this number continued to rise until the end of the period. Meanwhile, the number of travelers visiting the country remained relatively stable throughout this period.
In October 2009, around 550,000 people left the country for short trips, while arrivals were fewer, at 490,000. Thereafter, these numbers increased until October 2010, where the number for resident reached approximately 600,000, and the number for visitor hit the highest, at around 520,000.
From this point, until the end of the period, the number of residents who left the country for trips continued to follow an upward trend, a similar rate of incline. In contrast, the incoming visitor number was declined to reach the initial number at the beginning, roughly 490,000.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: LizaSat
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47113733792 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3491978953 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527730707517 0.215688989381 245% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252625251768 0.103423049105 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1667148013 0.0843802449381 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374824434426 0.15604864568 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13752047145 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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