some people believe that it's not necessary to have internet access to live a family life. What is your opinion,give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Internet is everywhere and have a lot of things, exception of human emotions and activities. Some individuals think about that Net accessing is not need for survival of our entire life. It seems to me that agree with this statement, this essay will explain what things we didn't want from world wide web.
Firstly, Web is just gather information and visualise and help to us, certain situations we have not to seek from this. However, in our life a lot of things to learning as well as followed by some rules by help of surroundings without any gadgets. For instance, now a days the younger generation are addicting to the mobile phones and spending more time on it. additionally,this leads to gap between emotions from family, whereas health issues will Rises. more ever, the nature is our Eco friend and in which we make sure to pass the time with it therefore physical as well as mental relief from this.
It might be said that today's world is like a racing game so we need improve our professional way, that's needs to learn some useful information to make knowledge ourself.however, the not almost our entire life to stick to the information from the internet.
To conclude,the internet is extremely helpful in some manner.It seems to learn from some ethic's from our nature, family and friends than brings to be best
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| 2019-04-29 | Bhanu Kishore | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78111587983 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69474585362 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9823969013 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142157797822 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591362076602 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350136174538 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969700198006 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300374996353 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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