A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
Dear Sarah,
I am pleased for your letter. Just think: I want to recommend you a great holiday to one place that I had been visit a year ago. In the north west of Scotland there is one place called Lochinver. From the north coast needed thirty miles to get there.
It is just a small town. There are two hotels in the center of town, the Kirkaig and the Assynt hotel. In the outside town you can get a campsite. I chose to stay at the Kirkaig hotel. I know you as well that you and your families are travelers so I suggest you for the camping choice to get a pleasant experience.
There are a lot fascinating places but it’s a bit hangs on the weather. You can go to a beautiful beach, a golf course, the fishing place as you want. If you desire to get great scenery, there are fabulous hills for walking.
Don’t worry about the food. I’m sure you will like the kind of meal in the hotel. But if you prefer to camp, the foods are whenever you want.
Send me another letter if you need more detail about the place.
Best regards,
Deis
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