The table and the bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and chart inform the percentage of form transport used by commuters in Houston, Texas, their average age, and amount of carbon dioxide produced by each type of traveler.
Most people utilize machine vehicle to reach their work. There are 48 percent of workers prefer to drive car alone, and 11 percent sharing car with others. Then again, 37 percent employees use train or buses. On the other side, just 4 percent of total commuters that walk or cycle to their work.
The age of travellers who use machine vehicle older than those who walk or cycle. The average age of traveller by machine is 44 or 45, while average age of people that walk or cycle is 39.
Driving alone by car produce the most carbon dioxide, almost 0.35 kilos per person per kilometre. At the same time, people who share transport produce 0.08 kilos. Travelers who utilize public transport produce small amount.
In a nutshell, walk or cycle to work help reduce the pollution.
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Sentence: Driving alone by car produce the most carbon dioxide, almost 0.35 kilos per person per kilometre.
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just 4 percent of total commuters that walk or cycle to their work.
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The age of travellers who use machine vehicle older than those who walk or cycle.
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