The table below shows the number of visitors to ashdown museum during the year after it was refurbished. the chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied their with their visit during the same period.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below illustrate the duration of time before and after year of river we should the acid on museum by number of frequenters .the pie chart finalize the outcomes of visitors review before and after where they visited.
The before year the guests were attended the 74000 and modernizef after grows up to 92000.additional, the more satisfied review came from forwarded year than previous year and followed by the very satisfied with 35%.
The difference in the results demonstrates that the no response 5% is as same as, very satisfied goes Down 10 % to 5% and moreover dissatisfied stand at 40 percent before progression then after becomes 15%.
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| 2019-05-01 | Bhanu Kishore | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 548.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79462293617 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697247706422 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 7.76029781788 43.030603864 18% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 182.666666667 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192868874108 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119905158657 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426030355965 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119905158657 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426030355965 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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