Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.
Crimes are virus to the society if it is not mitigated in time, it may demolish society, culture and economy. Recently, more crimes are committed by teenagers in metropolitan cities is a burgeoning issue. In this essay I shall enumerate causes of this negative trend and suggest some ways to combat.
First and foremost reason is movies and television series showing detailed crimes. The visuals seen stimulate heavily to young minds towards criminal activities, they try to copy it for fun but eventually it becomes a habit and finally an unorganized crime. Secondly, thirst of living lavish life among adolescences is also a considerable reason. Requirement to fulfill the desire encourages them to commit a crime like robbery and shoplifting for money to buy expensive things. Finally, evolution of internet and other technology are also plays a significant role to motivate young people to commit a cyber-crime. Technology and crime are indispensable. With the help of internet they can hack websites and steal money from someone's bank account. These crimes must be stopped effectively.
The solution is not that easy. First of all, need to find root causes and end them. The motive to indulge in crime should be finished by providing appropriate knowledge. At the early age in the school, children should be taught the detrimental effects of crime to themselves and to society. Additionally, movies and television series which is related to crime should be banned to watch up to certain age as visuals affect the most. The detailing of crime shown in any video interests young one most thus, it should be kept away from them.
In conclusion, i would like to reiterate that young ones commit crime for fun or for need by using technology, so, the motive and material must be barred for them to decrease such miss-happenings for betterment of society and economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...be kept away from them. In conclusion, i would like to reiterate that young ones...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05825242718 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83509922625 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.792328885 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184431123128 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565495800198 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476590464046 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115249632062 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636173210194 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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