Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should address both of the views presented.
While some people may believe that corporations have a responsibility to protect
society, others believe that the only purpose of a corporation is to make money. I agree
that making profits is important. In the grand scheme of things, though, all companies
have a responsibility to watch out for their customers. Their customers are how they
make their money. If they’re not watching out for their customers, they obviously will
see a drop in their profits.
Consider light bulbs. This is an invention that has all kinds of potential for serious
accidents. It is basically just a glass globe with electricity running through it! If a bulb
gets too hot, it could potentially start a fire. Similarly, if someone removed the glass from around the tungsten wire, you’d basically have an exposed electrical wire that
could hurt anyone who touched it. Makers of light bulbs know and understand all these
dangers. They want consumers to purchase their products, so the first and smartest
way to make that happen is to ensure that the products are safe and thus more
attractive to the customer base. If everyone who used light bulbs was afraid of getting
zapped profits would obviously go down and light bulbs would not be a very profitable
enterprise.
This same thinking applies to all major products. The automobile is one of the most
dangerous tools man uses. Tens of thousands of automobile drivers die every year in
accidents. Insuring that the vehicles contain designs and parts that promote customer
safety is a main focus of car manufacturers. Certain parts of of cars were built with
promoting driver’s well-being in mind. For instance, air bags, anti-lock braking
systems, online crash reporting. These features are considered standard now, and they
were all developed to increase the safety of consumers. These features were not cheap
to develop, but car manufacturers improved their profits anyway because they
developed products with public safety in mind, which is what customers expect. If this
symbiosis relationship wasn’t true, then we would still have cars without airbags or
even seatbelts. Worrying about the safety and actually improving it for customers is
not just a basic responsibility of corporations, but it drives their profits, too.
In conclusion, its pretty clear that a corporation’s desire to make more profits is
in line with a corporation’s responsibility to consumers. Increasing the focus on
consumers, worrying about taking care of them and the environment, can only lead
to bigger profits and success for corporations in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...arts that promote customer safety is a main focus of car manufacturers. Certain parts of ...
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Line 19, column 60, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...cus of car manufacturers. Certain parts of of cars were built with promoting driver&...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, first, if, may, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35167464115 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99397015407 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576555023923 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5834762719 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2083333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.97078651685 604% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204079172129 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513505235122 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751748718866 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509974104968 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673003668091 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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