In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people, visit the museum and historical sites. Why does this happen, and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places.
History plays the prominent role in every humans life because it provides information about traditions and culture. In the past mostly people visited the many historical places like museums and so on but the present days local resident donot visit any historical places. Mostly visitors come from another countries to see the old places. This essay will discuss the major reasons and possible remedies to attract more local individual to visit the places.
To begin with there are various causes why local people donot visit the historical places. Firstly, local resident are already familiar with their local cultures and traditions and they find it boring to again visit the similar place. For example, individuals want to see the new modern building rather than old buildings. Secondly, local residents donot want to spend money on visiting the same things. Moreover, foreign people have more curosity to visit the new places. For instance, in my country there is one famous museum which known as Virsat-e-khalsa and that museum take alot of entry. People visit that place for one time and then left. They donot want to visit again and spend money.
On the other hand, there are various remedies to solve that problem. Firstly, government should put the local history in the school syllabus and also arganisted the cultural activities. Like schools give the assignment related to past time and also arganised the trip related to historical places. Secondly, authority should renovate the museum by using the latest technology. For example it provide the animation movie related to tradition and culture. Then it create the curosity an people to watch the movie and they attached with their culture. Finally, government should remove the entry fees because so many donot visit the place due to its high costs.
In conclusion, there are various causes and solution to solve this problem like government should provide the free entrance and should also into the local history into the school syllabus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18461538462 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36832350261 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504615384615 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5700737633 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303985783727 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957292394629 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957200486383 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184257501462 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106203228015 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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