The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares how many women who is none of occupation divide into 4 categories which including england, Wales, Scotland and finally is northern Ireland of british between 2013 and 2014
Overall, It is clearly to seen there was a upward trend in england and Scotland while Wales and northern Ireland experienced a contrasting movement over the given period.
In 2013, It is easily to see that england was the highest rank around 6.8 percentages while Wales was hit a bottom nearly 5.4 percentages. Furthermore, Scotland was the second place about 6.1 percentages whereas northern island saw 0.5 percentages lower
On the other hand, 3 nations included england Wales northern island tend to decreased dramatically. For example in 2013 england was 6.8 pecentages while in 2014 saw a significantly decline less than nearly 3 percentage in 2013. In addition both of wales and north Ireland were plunged sharply from 5.4 percentages to 5,0 percentages and 5.6 percentages to nearly 10 percentages declined respectively. Whereas in 2014 saw a jumped rapidly in Scotland from 6,1 percentages to nearly 8 percentages.
- The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. 73
- the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria the Northern Territory and Tasmania Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 69
- The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. 78
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...verall, It is clearly to seen there was a upward trend in england and Scotland wh...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...nd was 6.8 pecentages while in 2014 saw a significantly decline less than nearly 3 percentage in 2013. ...
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Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ss than nearly 3 percentage in 2013. In addition both of wales and north Ireland were pl...
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Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rcentages declined respectively. Whereas in 2014 saw a jumped rapidly in Scotland...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, whereas, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96348143612 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9770569679 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 5.23603664747 296% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499677123516 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322832905104 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290562644519 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329925103301 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268448778787 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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