In today’s world one can communicate to people across the globe through internet or various text messengers. Some people claim that by doing so physical interaction between people has considerable reduced. I do agree to certain extent because in today’s generation, people are more comfortable texting instead of personal conversation. This essay will discuss why personal interaction has reduced.
In recent time, with the advancement in communication system the world is brought closer together through various communication techniques. With the introduction of social networking sites like Facebook and Orkut, messages and information can be shared globally within second as compared to earlier times where people had to write letters and post it, taking days to receive. This advancement in communication system like internet has numerous advantages. Firstly, one can interact with number of colleague simultaneously. For example as compared to the past where communication could be done one to one, with the internet and group conversation features, more number of people can be part of the interaction. Secondly, one can check for grammatical mistake or think over the consequence before sending a text message. For example people have the opportunity to go through the message and correct it before sending it.
Although, recent communication system has numerous advantages, it mitigating effect on human being. Humans are so habituated with online chatting that they get addicted and slowly lose interest in personal interaction. They tend to feel shy when it comes to face to face interaction and tend to be very uncomfortable. They prefer to have conversation where the opposite person is not seeing them. For example children at dinner table won’t even dare to look at their parent during conversation. They tend to become introvert and are comfortable in their own imaginary boundary.
To recapitulate, modern means of communication system has brought the world closer through video chatting and texting. However, it has adversely affected human behavior and made them introvert. Therefore, some people fear that with increasing population using online chatting features, face to face interaction will soon fade away.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to face'.
Suggestion: to face
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61583577713 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0706935171 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560117302053 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4424282159 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231388983436 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640664312465 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595579803642 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136699811976 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387528429171 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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