Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Some people conceive a notion that it is locals’ duty to keep their area clean and tidy. Others perceive that it is the government’s job. Therefore, ahead of my position both sides ought to be discussed.

To commence with, there is a proverb “small drops fill a lake”. In other words, if everyone contributes a little, then it can have a great impact. Therefore, if every individual tries to maintain cleanliness in their area then these efforts will eventually make a better and clean country. Needless to say, the place will become more hygienic and diseases free. Additionally, to keep neighborhood clean is also all citizen’s job. In some countries it is, in fact, mandatory. For example, in countries such as USA, Canada and Australia the law abides all the citizens to clean their footpath after snowfall. If they fail to do so, they can face serious charges from authority. Eventually, all follows the law and in no time the dwellers can get a cleaned walking passage.

However, it is also an undeniable fact that the government should also show some responsibility to clean the local areas. This is because of the fact that citizen pays taxes to the nation to get some basic facilities. Healthy and clean neighborhood is a basic need of everyone. Hence, government should actively involve in keeping the local areas clean. In 2014, India started a campaign called “ Clean India”. Under this project the prime minister of India developed a special division that maintain the cities litter free. The end result is incredible. The towns and villages of India are now clean more than ever.

All in all, I pen down by concluding that it is compulsory to keep one’s local area clean and tidy. In my opinion, residents and government both plays a substantial roll in maintaining their surroundings.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ility to clean the local areas. This is because of the fact that citizen pays taxes to the nation to get...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9199542995 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8269816741 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2272727273 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28980643314 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791657142893 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066385773402 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19397220548 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432131228863 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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