Bar Chart : The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The figure elucidates the rate of individuals who ate five portions of healthy foods per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008. At first glance, it is evident that females has the highest percentage of consuming healthy food in comparing to other aspects.
To begin with, there was a dramatic upsurge in the number of females who ate vegetables and fruits in which it, initially, stood at just above a fifth and peaked approximately at a third in 2006. Unfortunately, it plummeted considerably, plunging to three-tenths by the end of period shown.
In contrast, the percentage of males consumption remained stable for the first three years. Afterwards, it uplifted tremendously from 2003, which made up at just above 15%, through to 2006, which made up at just over a fourth, and erratically, over the following 2 years, it plummeted moderately to just below the previous time. Following the same pattern as males, 2001 to 2008 witnessed a fluctuation of juveniles consumption of healthy foods in which it upright positioned at just over a tenth in 2001 and terminated to 1 in 4 in 2008.
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- The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. 73
- Bar Chart : home and international students, 2010 – 2012. 73
- The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- Writing Task 2 (an essay)Some practical skills such as money management should be taught in high school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and real life examples. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, third, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9027027027 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99219339773 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2070859138 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187689719516 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888205578327 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10348723558 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133638251391 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741116979034 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.