In recent times due to the increase in the cost of living, many parents are forced to work. Some people claim that this has adverse effect on their offspring. This essay will discuss the effect of working parent on the family.
Due to the inflation, the standard of living in many developed countries has just shot up, making life difficult to sustain. With the real estate prices reaching the ceiling point where it is extremely difficult of one to even purchase it with the current salary. Due to oil and gas sector being hit transportation rate have increased considerable making travelling expensive. With all these it is very difficult for a single working member to provide his family with basis needs. Therefore, many parents are compelled to work to provide their family with basic necessities of life.
With both parent working there is not family life. Families tend to have no interaction resulting in misunderstand and family conflicts. There are many case studies where both the parent become stressed out and tends to get annoyed on each other’s mistakes, resulting in family separation.
On the other hand, this type of life style has adverse effect on the child future. Firstly, as there is no one to monitor or mentor the children, these children are very venerable and get easily convinced by outsider in doing wrong things. For example, there was a recent incident, where a child sold his families gold to get a pocket money to buy goodies. Secondly, these children being alone at home get addicted to TV resulting in slow development of the brain and other complication. Lastly, children nearing their youth, when unattended at home fell bored and try to explore the evil side of the society. For example, they tend to watch pornography, smoke and indulge in other bad habits.
To recapitulate, with both parents working, there are many ill effect and should be avoided. However , parent who have no other option need to spend precious time in nurturing their children and create a good relationship with them. Through proper communication they need to build gap between the children and parents. Parent should go for regular outing during their vacation or holidays thus enabling the child to experience the outside world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ed to work to provide their family with basic necessities of life. With both parent working th...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pocket money'.
Suggestion: pocket money
...e a child sold his families gold to get a pocket money to buy goodies. Secondly, these childre...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll effect and should be avoided. However , parent who have no other option need to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.032 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.602514226 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9283264736 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27787476819 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885214616763 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604784033821 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157972721981 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362671263753 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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