We live in time and age where everything in life has developed such as technology, education, lifestyle, e.t.c.
One of the technology's expansions is creating the microwave. And on this topic, we will discuss this development's causes and effects.
To start with, today lots of restaurants like, Burger King, MacDonalds, Pizzahut, e.t.c, are famous to sell for us the fast food, that's great, right?. But we also know that this kind of food even it is easier than when you are cooking, I mean you can eat it without making you tired when you prepared it, it is unhealthy food, they contain with fat and lots of calories.
And lots of us know that fat can make us with many diseases like heart attacks, an increase in blood pressure, and obesity. To talk about that, I remembered what happened to my brother when he was 11, when he ate his favourite food 'Burger' from the restaurant and at night, suddenly he had a stomach ache, so we called the doctor then we discovered that he had inflammation of the intestine because of this food.
Secondly, to talk about the great machine and one of the great inventions it is called " Microwave ", lots of people, especially the employers know this machine's benefit which can help you to make your lunch easier and faster. And by this invention, lots of usage's products will reduce like oven and cooking's machine, and this is bad. And as we know the microwave has waves which maybe are effecting on the food what we will eat it, so, finally they will cause us damage to our health.
At the end of this argument, I showed my opinion that even if fast food is delicious and I love it very much, and the microwave is easier to cook quickly, but I don't like this kind of inventions because they also have a negative effect on our lives and on our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, i mean, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55521472393 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45042878431 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6316493958 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214795659133 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824292078758 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070849693898 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101312859844 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942270372026 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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