In recent years, genetic engineering has developed a lot for humans, animals, and plants. Some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional methods. Discuss both points of your view and give your own opinion.
genetic engineering has became the latest success story of modern world. While some researchers and academics are in favour of it's impotance, a number of people are opposed to this and considering genetic engineering as a risky approach. this essay will discuss both views, elaborating on benefits and drawbacks behind recent flourishment of genetic engineering. however, I see the growth as a blessing for human kind.
Firstly, genetic engineering has opened opportunities for different medical issues for humans, animals and plants. diseases that had no prior treatments are now being cured through the modern inventions. For instance, new born baby with underdeveloped body parts like brain, lungs or heart can have the possibility of survival through the recent formulas of genetic engineering. Secoudly, scientists are getting wider resources to arrange lab tests and run diverse range of projects which will ultimately lead to discover more medicines for living creatures. As a result, in a matter of time there will be no unwanted death or unpreventable diseases. Thirdly, human beings are always interested to learn about the brief history of mother earth and the presence of life in it. The success of genetic engineering is important for the discovery of it and to understand the chances of another living being's presence, outside of the universe.
On the other hand, people who are against this technology would argue that genetic engineering is destroying natuaral living process. people are following scientific solutions which can eventually lead to break the ecosystem. Moreover, some experiments can go to an uncontrollable situation which may lead to make a new creature by mixture of two living being. And who knows what kind of danger that may bring to our society? however, international law enforcement and keen observation over genetic labratories can easily protect and reduce the risks.
To conclude, genetic engineering has solved some challenges for humankind and other species. As the above discussion outlines, genetic engineering can bring positive impacts associated with some risks. But it can be monitored and by any means, new scientific experiments are highly needed for the growth of civilazation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44827586207 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97212019956 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1870348825 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7894736842 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210561301211 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641571430802 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534904171664 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133721224931 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349700484678 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.