Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions of individuals are wasteful and irrelevant and it is only government and large businesses that can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impacts on human life. Although governments and influential businesses have been the primary role in preventing global climate change because of their resouces and authorities, doing this at a personal level should be viewed as the ultimate approach for humankind to combat climate change.
On the one hand, governments and influential businesses are the only ones taking steps to prevent climate change. First, governments can carry out policies and make laws to limit the activity that causing the environmental pollution. For example, in order to reduce the consumption of fuels that are harmful to the environment, countries like Japan and Vietnam use Carbon tax to impose upon companies that emit CO2 a lot, which is why these countries are cleaner than others without Carbon tax. Second, by maximsing the profits, influential businesses and corporation, especially in the manufacturing and mining industries, can be the main cause of climate change. In fact, they consume massive carbon-rich energy sources, such as coal, oil and gas, which directly correlates with the intensification of global warming.
On the other hand, everyone should be recognized his or her significant role in combating climate change. First, by reducing a low acceptable energy on a daily basis, individuals collectively can make a sizeable positive changes. For instance, by saving 2% of electricity using in every family, the amount of saved energy is enormous, which offers a lot of benefits in the long run. In addition, individuals collectively can affect businessies profits. For example, they might refuse to buy products from the companies that do not have the high responsibility on desposing of waste properly.
In conclusion, both individuals and governments should dedicate times and efforts to control future consequences of climate change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...llectively can make a sizeable positive changes. For instance, by saving 2% of electric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03785560333 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0538198214 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267348663908 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918574242902 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059855002011 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152971347375 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163002289973 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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