The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates three potential locations (A, B and C) for a new hypermarket in the city of Pellington.
It is obvious that Pellington is a quite big city with 120000 population. The main difference between the proposed sites is that the zone A is in the residential area, near the city centre, while zone B and C are outside the country. The sites can also be compared in terms of access by railway or motorway and their position relative to other parts of the city.
According to the map, A is in the housing area and it is to the west of the traffic-free zone, closer to park, be...
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