You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the problem-Provide an appropriate solution

Essay topics:

You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the problem
-Provide an appropriate solution

Hi,

this is vamsi from house No 21 that is next to your Home 20.
we have observed that there has been a lot of trash & garbage flowing towards our house due to different reasons like air, animals and etc.
we have been cleaning this stuff from quite a long time. but I wanted to bring it to your notice as it has been off late very tough for us and the community too.
I would request you to place trash or garbage in the allocated bins rather than keeping them outside.
I am writing this letter not to point something at you but request you to take the possible measures.

Looking for a positive reply from you.

Thanks & Regards,
vamsi.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...se No 21 that is next to your Home 20. we have observed that there has been a lot...
^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... to different reasons like air, animals and etc. we have been cleaning this stuff from ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ning this stuff from quite a long time. but I wanted to bring it to your notice as ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 540.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46280991736 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08897214286 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 159.3 290.88556701 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0882165672 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109472228025 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428069626833 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427995374158 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534278376578 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038463277779 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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