People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about natural world.
Currently, people always concentrate on life issues instead of paying attention to the nature world. While a strong case of this view, people should give initiative to remind them about its importance.
In the one hand, human could live longer because they depend on natural world, but most of them do not focus on it. What reasons making people neglect it? There are two major reasons that could explain about above circumstance. One reason is that nature always besides people, thus they do not respect it. Even some people have illegal action including deforestation or overuse chemicals to destroy natural environment. For instance, precious animals gradually become extinct due to illegal hunting to make their own profit. Another reason is that society results in numerous social problems, hence they are not enough time to research profoundly about nature world. According to the newest scientist, people spend at least 14 hours on working or learning per day, so they are too exhausted to focus on it.
In the other hand, before alarming situation, they measure to give initiative in order to make them know more about natural world. Firstly, government should organize competition involved in nature to propagate about its benefits and drawbacks. As far as I know, in big countries, politician creates a competition with large scale to introduce about importance environment. And build relationship with other countries simultaneously. Furthermore, they establish channel related to natural world in order that it could communicate with watchers easily. For example, animal world channel in Vietnam always attract to people because they could relax and research without difficulty.
In conclusion, from above reasons, people should apply solutions to replicate human mind about natural world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plicate human mind about natural world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, while, at least, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43060498221 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6901419606 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6601971286 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401808586848 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127777382309 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742987824401 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255243923853 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279245477578 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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