If a person to whom you know wants to move to your city. What you think that what will be his liking and disliking.
The new place is always confusing for anybody. A person is always curious to know about the new place. If a person whom I know is planning to move to my city, I think that it would be a great experience for him. I would like to tell him some special features of my city. There will be many things are new to him. Some features will be favorable for him and some will be unfavorable. I will explain more in the following essay.
First of all, my city is a very big city. He will get many opportunities here. Additionally, he can easily find a new job since many industrial areas and many companies in the town. Besides these, he can easily access to anywhere with the help of the fastest public transportation like metro trains, fastest bus service, and other transportation. Since he is fond of eating varieties of foods, he can easily access many restaurants, malls, cafeterias, street food. He will find any type of food in the town. Furthermore, he has a great internet connection in every corner of the city. Therefore, I think that these things will be beneficial for him and he will like this.
Moreover, since this is a big city, it is very noisy and overcrowded. Sometimes traffic is very terrible in office hours. He will not like the overcrowded areas. Furthermore, apartments are very costly in the city area if he wants to live in the city center. There are strict traffic rules here. If anybody crosses the rules, he has to pay fine. So, he has to be careful while driving. Hence, there are fewer disadvantages than advantages. In some areas, the roads are very terrible, and without street lights. It is very difficult to drive in on those areas at night.
In the nutshell, there are many merits for him. So he will probably like the best features of the city. There are also downsides, he will not appreciate it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the fastest'.
Suggestion: , the fastest
... public transportation like metro trains, fastest bus service, and other transportation. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... downsides, he will not appreciate it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56193353474 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63756778338 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486404833837 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4267293113 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.9285714286 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8214285714 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175280992278 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535076016463 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618059991277 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116299925239 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615578402428 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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