Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Industries are sometimes built-in residential areas, some people consider that they should be transferred out of the city. In my opinion, I think that having a distinguished industrial area is more beneficial as compared to its presence inside the city.
To start with, although the presence of factories in non-residential areas does not protect the environment from pollution, but it definitely protects people from any sort of illness as they are living away from these areas. For example, my school was situated in an area where there was a paper industry, all the students had to face a lot of noise during their classes which continuously disturbed us. So, we daily had to suffer from noise pollution. Moreover, land cost is relatively low in industrial areas as compared to residential areas, therefore, it is easy for the owners to buy one to build an industry. Furthermore, the area is less crowded so it is easy for large vehicles to transport goods from place to place.
On the other hand, there are also some drawbacks of having industries far from urban areas. For one, heavy vehicles like trucks and lorries are required for the delivery of goods as small vehicles cannot take away a large amount of material, consequently, owners have to pay more amount to the drivers. For another, labors or employees also have to spend their more time in traveling to the companies away from their home. For instance, if they have to enroll themselves early morning in office they may have to leave their residence at dawn time, which is such a difficult situation for them.
In conclusion, however, there are some advantages to having commercial areas inside the city, but it can be detrimental to the people in the form of pollution. So, such areas better should be transferred far away from urban sites.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 424, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to the companies away from their home. For instance, if they have to enroll themse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93811074919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73863700176 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0551175496 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206838525426 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782568885188 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423327530417 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138755413677 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384509963259 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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