Many people believe that that international tourism is a bad thing for this countries.What are the reasons for this?what can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70866141732 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88420633123 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.295875817 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.0 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.8 7.06120827912 422% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232166282489 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132083129886 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716140735365 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108299208284 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729482991718 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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