Take a look at the graphic and complete the task.
The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart provides information about the average age of marriage and the size of a family across 9 nations.
Overall, the most noticeable trend is the younger people are to get married, the higher the ratio of children per woman, with the figures for Brazil and the United States being the exceptions. Also, while the largest family size is found in Kenya, residents in Denmark get married the latest.
In detail, people in Kenya typically get married at 22 years old, which is slightly younger than those in India and China (in the mid 20s). However, it is also Kenya that has the largest family size, with 3 children per woman, whereas smaller ratios are found in India (2.5 to 1) and China (1.5 to 1).
This correlation is also observed in countries where the age of marriage is relatively older. People in Australia, Netherlands and the U.K all get married in their 30s while Denmark holds the top spot at 33 for marriage age. In these nations, each woman takes care of around 1.8 children. By comparison, Brazil and the United States do not follow the same trend. While nationals of both countries get married in their late 20s, their family sizes are remarkably large (around 2 children per woman for Brazil and around 2.5 for the United States).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ple in Australia, Netherlands and the U.K all get married in their 30s while Denm...
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...dren per woman for Brazil and around 2.5 for the United States.
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...and around 2.5 for the United States.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71818181818 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3397216759 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8020334434 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892726132319 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444314723128 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426318384819 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692331071311 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556886896491 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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