The table depicts data about using of energy in United state from 2008 report since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Overall, most of energy: fossil fuel ( Petrol and oil) , coal, natural gas, nuclear and solar wind all will go up through the period. On the other hand, Hydro power will decrease slightly at the end of the period.
From 1980 to 2008, there was a moderate fluctuation in fossil fuel, natural gas nuclear, solar wind just fluctuated slightly. From 2008 to the end of the period, all of fossil fuel, coal, natural gas, nuclear and solar wind will be increase gradually.
In 28 years ( 1980- 2008), Hydro power fluctuated minimally, From 2008 forward, water power will be a minimal decrease at the end of period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 607.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.856 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22919823411 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.102792117 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1456006782 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899347671563 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119977679784 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123258069951 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134055660969 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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