Dear sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to the advertisement in hindustan times for the recruitment of waiter and waitresses.
I am 23 year old, with doing my hotel management course from chitkara university, I am also indulge in part time job in a 5 star hotel named "j w marriot" as a senior waiter and have a team of 5 persons.
I am very enthusiastic person and a very keen lerner moreover I am l having with me qualification as well as experiance in the same field. I am very keen to start my first job a reputed motel like yours. I will be available for the interview at any desirable time except monday, as on monday I have to visit my college.
Hope you will find my details in order and give me a chance to serve you.
Yours sincerely
Jacob miller
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
...rse from chitkara university, I am also indulge in part time job in a 5 star hotel name...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...itkara university, I am also indulge in part time job in a 5 star hotel named 'j w m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...waiter and have a team of 5 persons. I am very enthusiastic person and a very ...
^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s well as experiance in the same field. I am very keen to start my first job a re...
^
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y first job a reputed motel like yours. I will be available for the interview at ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 649.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44520547945 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81323474588 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.831378786 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7142857143 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139080644655 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070394281381 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641066233278 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857647936189 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765580844662 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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