Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?.
People have different views about that today people have too many option in life. Personally, I am convinced that we have various of choices nowadays and it cause of the develope of technology and entertainment.
According to some facts, there are several reason why we have fewer choices in something during our life. Firstly, people nowadays have fewer choices about the accommodation. In comparison with the life in past, today, people have to build their own house with a common model, rent an apartment in the building due to the expensive cost and the management of the government. Instead of stay in a house which look like every one in the street people in the past can build house with their own ideal without permission. In addition, children have to follow a standard education which has many subjects that they may don’t like. Back to the past, when a child want to a farmer can learn how to use some tools and deal with the problems with plants and cattle while the other want to be a cooker can work in restaurant when they were young to prepare for their career in the future. it can be clearly seen that, people nowadays may don’t have many options in some life sides because of culture and tradition.
Despite of those above arguments, I belive that we have many choices in modern life. The highlight example is the options in goods we can buy. nowadays, because of the develop of technology, people can reduce the cost of the product and improve the quality. As a result, many branch were established and the more branch we have the more choices we get. Moreover, we get so many ways to relax and entertain. In the past, people just don’t have many hobbies like we have in modern life, for instance social network, travel abroad are two favourite activities in free time which people in the past don’t have. Last but not least, to day people can taste a lot of food come from all over of the world. The develop of transportation and online marketing connect customers around the world to the companies. Consequence, they bring the local food and sell them to people in another country easily and customers can try many foreign foods without travel oversea.
In conclusion, nowadays, we have many choices in our life and it gains us a lot of benefit. Thus, I strongly argued that it will have positive effects to modern life in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
... views about that today people have too many option in life. Personally, I am convinced tha...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...have various of choices nowadays and it cause of the develope of technology and enter...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...wer choices about the accommodation. In comparison with the life in past, today, people ha...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ommodation. In comparison with the life in past, today, people have to build their own ...
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Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...prepare for their career in the future. it can be clearly seen that, people nowada...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ple is the options in goods we can buy. nowadays, because of the develop of technology, ...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... goods we can buy. nowadays, because of the develop of technology, people can reduce the co...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun branch seems to be countable; consider using: 'many branches'.
Suggestion: many branches
...t and improve the quality. As a result, many branch were established and the more branch we...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...f food come from all over of the world. The develop of transportation and online marketing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71770334928 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48778982933 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6301293698 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255750460853 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896175731655 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514550167033 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176818032584 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481734340489 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.