In some countries more and more shops are open long hours every day. What are some positive and negative developments of this situation?
Nowadays, we live in a capitalist economic system where consumerism encourages the acquisition of goods and services in ever-increasing amount, and to fulfil this demand in the global market trade, more and more commercial activities have to work for long hours daily. This essay will highlight both positive and negative developments bet results from such circumstances.
To begin with the positives, a significant advantage is that costumers can buy goods whenever do you watch the need. For example, 24/7 stores offer a service during all the hours of the day every day of the week. This makes life easier for a lot of people who do not have time to shop during working hours. Even going you need something in the middle of the night these shops come to your rescue. Not only this, back shaving long hour open stores means there are needed more people to take all shifts which are positive for the unemployment rate.
However, this phenomenon emboldens people to consume with a progressively increasing trend, in bed the environment meaning negative ways. Being open for long hours these objects need big electricity conception, which in high rates create problems with global warming. Moreover, having the possibility to purchase more goods increase the amount of waste that we produce with a result to pollute the ecosystem we live in.
In conclusion, although these shops are lifesavers for a myriad of people, it is important to consider that they come with plenty of environmental problems, such as global warming and pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09486166008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7655333076 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8658907616 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24065443001 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865873617439 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616625270504 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135199996398 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735621911726 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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