Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television .newspapers magazines and other media pay attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the people must have broad knowledge of many academic fields. However, there are those who argue that everybody should better have a specific subject. I, to a great extent, agree with the second group. In my opinion, we need to be an expert in a certain field so that we not only improve the field by creating new research but also make money from this way.
The first and foremost reason is that we must do the best so that we can earn a deep knowledge from one subject and, sometimes, two connected subjects or relevant subjects. The lifetime of everyone is so limited and they are not able learn some various fields of study during their life. Therefore, focusing on one or two subjects is so beneficial for every person. it is obvious that the big men in the word always donate whole time to a certain field in order to be a perfect specialist. The perfect example in this respect, is DR. Hesabi, the best expert of brain in the word.
The second and the tired factors which should be taken into consideration are the fruits of being a brilliant expert. The best fruit is that the one can change that subject through creating new idea, investing new techniques and a lot of various research fields in that specific field. improving technologies and industries stems from the people donate their time and life in certain filed and send their findings to the new generations.
The last reason can be one of their other benefits: making money and finding a good job. Todays, in over the word, most nations bump into unemployment problem. it is better to say that this issue in the middle East is so painful. in my point of view, one of the main reasons of this issue is that, most of the people have not a certain knowledge. if they have, not only the big men and women are able to create job for themselves, but also they can provide a lot of job opportunities for working classes and middle classes of a nation.
In short, all the mentioned reason lead us to the conclusion that specializing in one specific subject is so far better than paying attention to divers fields. this results in being a big specialist, moving the train of progress in the word and creating job opportunities for own and others. I think with understanding this information about, if almost all agree with me or not?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'deep knowledge'.
Suggestion: deep knowledge
...we must do the best so that we can earn a deep knowledge from one subject and, sometimes, two co...
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Suggestion: It
...ects is so beneficial for every person. it is obvious that the big men in the word...
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Suggestion: Improving
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...nations bump into unemployment problem. it is better to say that this issue in the...
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...issue in the middle East is so painful. in my point of view, one of the main reaso...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'certain knowledge'.
Suggestion: certain knowledge
...ue is that, most of the people have not a certain knowledge. if they have, not only the big men and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, i think, in short, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56666666667 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50810477635 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7188774938 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834363263925 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269147626109 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309042892378 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524918536813 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287377866365 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.