The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I agree that the effectiveness of a countries leaders is best represented through examination of that country’s citizens. this is because the wellbeing of the citizens is the direct effect of the decisions that the leader makes. every decisions made in government impacts the lives of citizens whether it be positive or negative.
one aspect of government that is constantly debated over among leaders is healthcare. Obviously the ideal situation would be that everyone has healthcare so that everyone is able to get the help they need to ensure they are in good health. The question is how do we go about making sure everyone has healthcare? if the leader decides that healthcare costs will be taken care of through taxes then it can impact the citizens both positively and negatively. it impacts the citizens positively by ensuring everyone has access to healthcare. On the other hand, this can be seen as negatively impacting other as more wealthy people pay more in taxes than the less wealthy. this is because in order to make sure that even the poorest people have healthcare you must use the taxes of the wealthy to cover the cost.
leaders often debate about the best way to run the economy and actions that may benefit the economy. A new law put in order could totally change the economy, without the leader intending to. For example, there has been a lot of talk around banning abortions. when you think of this topic you often think about you’re beliefs on the topic such as if you’re “pro life” or “pro choice”. The thing most people don’t think about is how it could potentially impact the economy. The banning of abortion would lead to the closing of many abortion clinics, leading to many people losing their jobs. this loss of jobs could negatively impact the economy. At the same time, if the abortion clinics we government funded then this might benefit the economy as it will be one less thing the government will be expected to fund. this could potentially even lower taxes benefitting the citizens.
Climate change has become well known and talked about topic in recent years, especially in politics. this is because our leaders of the country are the only ones that can truly make a large impact on environment as a whole. they are the one factor that could help turn this around. The leaders could do this by putting forth laws for us to follow when it comes to littering. For example, if you are found littering then you would get a fine. In my college town, Iowa City, you can even get fined for not recycling cardboard. this is very important because these laws makes people aware of their actions and the consequences they could have. The fine also motivates people to recycle, rather than be lazy. if the government were to start funding more environmental clean up projects we may begin to see more results in nature, but we need our leaders to take more of an initiative before anything can be taken care of.
The leaders of our countries control every aspect of our lives whether we realize it or not. With ever choice they make in the government comes a consequences, which could effect you in a positive or negative way. Each decisions effects everyone differently, as it really depends on your situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, well, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2731.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 564.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84219858156 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59771257711 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462765957447 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 871.2 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7721719083 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0967741935 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1935483871 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.67741935484 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168477500924 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453303713397 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609588764274 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121365620416 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610101865426 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.