Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history.
Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news
ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own experience or knowledge.
In all countries, government's have a lot of duties. one of the most important duties is protect from history and transfer information and other relevant documents to the next generations. A group of people beleive that historical building should destroyed and construction news ones. In the essay, I arque that the benefits and importances of rebuild and repair the buildings that are a part of history and some tasks which governmets men must to do and some rules confirm. In my opinion, history is an unpartitionable part from each countries. It is so important to maintnance, repair, rebuild, develop, and introduce nation's building. This old constructions can be change to a source revenue for government and so many tourists came and visit these places.
As I mentioned before, the historical building apear the history from each country and kingdom. For example Takhte Jamshid in iran depicts the power of iranian kingdoms thousands years ago, or 33 Pol in Isfahan, iran illustrates the artitecture industry among iranian people in those ages. In Tehran is a house which related to Pahlavi king used for international meeting with other countries kings. All of these examples are some evidence that can explain, teach, show, and save history to children and students easily.
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- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is nacceptable in contemporary society.Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. 61
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. 61
- The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015 39
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'protected'.
Suggestion: protected
...es. one of the most important duties is protect from history and transfer information a...
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Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ory and some tasks which governmets men must to do and some rules confirm. In my opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16346153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87318247154 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1604569737 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6363636364 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19751282767 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657028487437 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419214653492 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143320588491 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737810919995 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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