In many countries, people opt for rented accommodation rather than considering to buy a home. In my opinion, this has certain benefits however, it is not advised in all the cases.
Firstly, one can make a better choice to move to the desired location as there are several factors to be examined such as proximity, city traffic, connectivity with public transport, and location. All these aspects are quite visible and easy to plan when we decide to rent a home. It is when one makes the decision to spend wisely by evaluating all personal requirements. Secondly, one need not worry about the general house maintenance or wear and tear which can be reported to the house owner at the time of need or before you occupy the house.
Lastly, one is relieved from paying huge EMIs with exorbitant interest rates levied by the bank which last for a long period of time. For instance, a loan can last up to 15-20 years in which the proportion of the interest paid over the investment is apparently higher.
On the other hand, to weigh the disadvantages, if one does not own a house it might result in frequent relocation causing extreme inconvenience to the whole family and deflect from their path to what they have desired to achieve. Furthermore, this would increase unnecessary transportation and security expenses resulting in the loss of money. Background checks and verifications are involved to prove the authenticity of all family members whenever they migrate from one place to another. It socially raises concerns over one's financial status and lifestyle which is deterring to one's relationships with people in general maintaining higher standards. Moreover, a significant amount of money is spent on higher rents rather than investments which is a discouraging element for a tenant to plan the future.
In conclusion, living on a rented home has both certain pros and cons and one must decide as to what is good for them to have a good and healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering buying'.
Suggestion: considering buying
...pt for rented accommodation rather than considering to buy a home. In my opinion, this has certain...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...evied by the bank which last for a long period of time. For instance, a loan can last up to 15...
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Line 6, column 582, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tus and lifestyle which is deterring to ones relationships with people in general ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92492492492 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84559215138 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1705115076 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174809520034 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658104569928 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111921171995 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118830976893 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100364551983 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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