Ecological scientists have warned us about the dire consequences to our environment caused by global warming, and this has been one of the biggest problems that people might face. This environment-related issue has confronted the government agencies and the general public from all around the world. In this essay, I will look at some causes for this to be happening and measures to be taken.
First of all, the number of cars is rising significantly nowadays since having a car offers ready access to a variety of services and leisure options. However, car exhaust, which aggravates the greenhouse effect, is detrimental to the environment. Exhausted car fumes and the daily amount of carbon dioxide being released can pollute the urban air, causing people to suffer from many respiratory diseases. To tackle this problem, the government could launch a campaign in the media and in schools to promote environmentally friendly cars which run solely on solar energy and hydrogen.
Secondly, because of people's destructive behavior, non-renewable energies such as fossil fuels and nuclear power are being exploited for the sake of making big money for corporations and big firms. As over usage of such energies can worsen the greenhouse effect, people could use more green products instead of consuming disposable goods. Moreover, the government might consider building more plants that utilize solar energy to generate power in order to slow down the pace of damage to the environment.
To conclude, global warming does more harm than good. The excessive number of car and the exploitation of non-renewable resources are some of the main reasons that can lead to global warming. However, if certain steps are be taken appropriately, this issue can be alleviated. Someday, we hope to bring our clean and fresh atmosphere back to the way it was.
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21476510067 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90621076115 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3028440208 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180204727753 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604260544475 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684269779849 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107443209324 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751531547868 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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