playing computer games is a waste of time. children should not be allowd to play them.
Nowadays, developement of science and technology specially by introducing new computers or smartphone affects children's life. they spend most of their time on playing different gamaes through computer or phone. some people beleieve that the parents should avoid children to play with such devices but others think that playing for children in this age is necessary and playing with technology devices also helps them for better growing. to some extend i believe that the disvantages of using computer play specially by considering children waste time is more than its merits.
to begin with, children addicted to play a lot with computer after a while and it becomes hard to get away these devices from them. creation new plays which are really apealling for children absorb them toward these devices so they spend most of their time on playing. since they play a lot with computer they do not pay attention to their school lessons and it causes that they do not acquire convenient results at school. for instane, my brother spent at least five hour a day on playing and he did not pay attention to his lessons. at the end of his elementry school his scores declincled from 19 to 15 so their teachers spoke a lot with my parents to find the reasons. finally they found out that the he waste his time a lot on playing many computers game.
second, playing a lot with computer avoids children to speak with their family and they do not have a good relationship with them because they do not have enough time after playing. Computer’s game get the family members away from each other and this causes many bad results on childrens life. for instance, my sister spent too much time to play a new game and after that she slope to wake up for her school. she never saw my parents and she never asked any question related to her problems from my parents. after two month she became so sad and nervess and her doctor said these are all results of bad relationship among family members.
However, in metropolitan cities people usually live in small houses without any yard so the children can not play out of their house. they force to spend much time in home so attractive play devices absorb them because they do not have any other entertaimnent and environment for spending their leisure time such as garden for playing socer.
in conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned reasons, playing a lot with computer wastes most of the children's time. since they do not have enough time for studying their lessons or speaking to their parants and it creats bad problems for them. however we should consider that they do not have additional entertainment devices or places so we should prepare convenient devices for their leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, really, second, so, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82127659574 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51514561145 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451063829787 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8928359409 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373338042543 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144699033147 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964891727471 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257174653617 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800879853569 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.