Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many country. What are the cause of this? WWhat solution can be offered?
childhood obesity is becoming a serious public health challenge in many countries. this essay will look at some primary cause of this and offered some possible solution to the problem.
there are a number of reasons for childhood obesity. The first reason unhealthy eating habitat. children nowadays tend to consume too much fast food, sugary drink,...These foods cause the kid to gain weight as they are high in fat and sugar but low in vitamins and minerals. Another reason is sedentary lifestyles. children tend to watch TV, browse the internet or play computer game instead of playing outsides or doing sports. As a consequent, they are becoming increasingly obese.
there are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the issue mentioned above. Firstly, it is important for parents to control what their children eat to make sure that they have a healthy diet. parents should also educate them about the detrimental effects of an imbalance diet to help them make a healthier food choice.
Secondly, unhealthy junk food should be banned from the school menu and fast food advertising should be limited. Finally, it is necessary for parents to restrict the time their children spend on sedentary activities and encourage them to take regular exercise. Physical exercise can help them to control their weight by burning excess calories that otherwise would be stored as fat.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the increase in childhood obesity and measures should be implemented to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22177419355 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60077519361 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.969432765 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247831806494 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720695360366 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884590114812 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15147296849 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132987706039 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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