At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays the percentage of youth in various countries around the globe has out raised the portion of older adults. This essay will explain why there are more advantages than disadvantages having a higher number of young adults in a country's population.
Considerating firstly the negatives of such a phenomenon, an important one is that older people have more experience in almost in every field of life: work, family, society and so on. For example, an older employee has more practical knowledge about a certain job, than a freshly graduated worker. Moreover, even there is the belief that having a certain age, that goes up, makes you less efficient for society, there are plenty of examples, such as politicians or philanthropists, to contrast this thought and demonstrate that the age and experience make the difference.
However, it is equally true that the youth is the future of every country: younger the population, higher the hopes for a brighter future. The word young itself means new, renovation, fresh, and with this in mind, we can say without any doubt, that young people are more predisposed, to learn and develop faster, the new technologies and inventions of our days. Only to consider the impact that social media has caused worldwide in this past recent years and to count that the inventors of the most famous social platforms like, Facebook, Twitter or Instagram, were only some geeks in their university days. A more recent example is Greta Thunberg, a 16 years old student, from Sweden, who had the courage, which most of the adults do not have, to raise her voice against environmental destruction, and was able to gather thousands of people, mostly her age, in every corner of our planet in a peaceful march showing, once again,that only the youth can break those chains that make all of us prisoners of our bad decisions.
In conclusion, even in a community are needed experienced people, who are experts in various features and with their knowledge help the maintenance of high standards, in my opinion, the development of such community depends exclusively from the younger ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 929, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needed experienced" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'experiencing' or 'to be experienced'.
Suggestion: experiencing; to be experienced
...clusion, even in a community are needed experienced people, who are experts in various feat...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ommunity are needed experienced people, who are experts in various features and with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04558404558 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77246771295 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1816124546 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.1 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14104965182 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560522997262 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599310586829 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093002440656 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806265894937 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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