The given bar graph elucidates how people in the USA frequently ate fast food in restaurants. The comparison includes the three years, i.e. 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Overall, only 4% of people chose to go to restaurants on a daily basis in the year 2003, which felt slightly decreased to 2% in 2006 and remain the same. By this, the people in the USA visit restaurants, several times a week had 17% of ratio and it is smoothly increased to 20% in 2006 but afterward again it goes down to 16% in 2013. The highest number of US citizens likes to go on weekends which involved 31% in 2003, further, it is more occupied and grows by 3% in 2006, While this category also faced the downfall of up to 8-9% after 2006.
Another category, once or twice a month had similar people included as a weekend category in 2003, and it is decreased by 5% in 2006 which improved rapidly and had 34% of people. Moreover, the people who only go to a few times in a year had 12% in 2003 and remains at 15% in both the years. Lastly, the citizens who never visited restaurants had 5% of people who stays on slight decreased to 4% in 2006 and 2013.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30985915493 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4013981248 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553990610329 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7368492028 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252849161662 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12635350432 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104854957717 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218647300251 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134082277134 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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