In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
Moving away from parent’s house at an early age is, perhaps, the first step in becoming an independent individual. Despite some disadvantages, I think this decision has its own advantages.
Nowadays, it is common to leave parents’ house at young age, although some people’s opinion is completely against this course of action due to its difficulties, and perhaps youngster’s lack of decision-making in times of crisis. In one hand, there can be some disadvantages for the youth as they may not know even how correctly to perform several simple housework. For instance, dishwashing and cleaning the house may seem easy, but performing these tasks is much harder in action. Furthermore, living alone and far away from one’s parents can cause some extreme emotional states. These emotions are caused by the fact that they have to do everything themselves without having a supporter to have their back. Coping up with these situations might be hard, but eventually, all these problematic emotional situations would be resolved by becoming a habit.
On the other hand, many people’s opinion is based on this fact that it would be necessary to live alone for some time to realize how hard it is to do everything alone and stand out against all the difficulties. First of all, it is an opportunity to obtain some privacy and independency after all. No matter how much sorrowful would be to lose ones parents, but eventually, it will happen sooner or later. It would be best getting used to hardships, however, its beneficial consequences will really worth the troubles. Second, one’s personality and self-confidence would be improved by successfully carrying out daily routines, which also can have tremendous impact on ones future.
In conclusion, it is beneficial to leave parents’ house early, and try to find how the world works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ter how much sorrowful would be to lose ones parents, but eventually, it will happen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, so, after all, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15824142346 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8083852942 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107261905579 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367245702272 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326300983982 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658893832776 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235847810859 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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