In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

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In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

Moving away from parent’s house at an early age is, perhaps, the first step in becoming an independent individual. Despite some disadvantages, I think this decision has its own advantages.

Nowadays, it is common to leave parents’ house at young age, although some people’s opinion is completely against this course of action due to its difficulties, and perhaps youngster’s lack of decision-making in times of crisis. First, the youth may not know even how correctly to perform several simple housework. For instance, dishwashing and cleaning the house may seem easy at first, but performing them is much harder in action. Second, living alone and far away from one’s parents can cause extreme emotional states. These emotions are caused by the fact that they have to do undergo everything without having a supporter to have their back. Coping up with this situation might be hard, but all these mixed emotions will be released in the end.

On the other hand, many people’s opinion is based on this fact that it is necessary to live alone for some time to realize how hard it is to do everything alone and stand out against all the difficulties. First of all, it is an opportunity to obtain some privacy and independence after all. Passing away of a loved one is a grief. Nevertheless, this natural accident will be forgotten eventually. Getting used to hardships would be the best option, however, its beneficial consequences will really worth the trouble. Furthermore, both personality and self-confidence will improve rapidly by successfully carrying out daily routines.

In conclusion, it would be more beneficial to leave parents’ house early, as it has a positive impact and tremendous outcome at the end, which certainly outweigh the disadvantages and difficulties.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, after all, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29757785467 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19713446728 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8413469322 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123984973087 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360389004159 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363683876458 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076310668893 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236113064925 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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