Eating too much sugar is harmful to our health. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is the individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar, they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that an excessive amount of anything is always injured to our health. In case of sugar consumption, whilst it is argued by many that usage of sugar should be restricted by higher authorities, opponents believe that every individual must acknowledge their sugar limitation; however, I agree with a later view due to a more realistic approach.
It is irrefutable that everyone should be accountable for his own diet. Where, in terms of reducing the sugar content in their food, there are main two major steps can be applied. Firstly, since each and every person have to maintain the right eating habits, highly sugar made foods made them habitual of it. Sometimes they eat outside at restaurants and bought packed food regardless of the sugar content, which is especially detrimental for sugar patients, as it led to high-density glucose. Secondly, everyone will have to be updated with the rate of sugar level in their blood test. If they do not pay any attention to their capacity level, no one other cannot control in either way. Resulting in high glucose, they caught by numerous diseases: heart diseases, obesity, diabetes. It is rightly said that 'health is wealth', therefore, one should keep oneself conscious of using sugar in a suitable ratio.
Having used to high sugar content in food, some people expect that government should be accountable for reducing this addiction. They state that supply of sugar must be limited amount during exportation in order to curtail this phenomenon. Such a law should be executed in order to restrict the over a large quantity of sugar in each product. Having been campaigned about the harm of extra use of the sugar, the majority of society member will be influenced, and probably would like to follow prescribed healthy tips by diet practitioners.
To encapsulate, a specific amount of sugar should be taken as per our body requirements. though, the consumption of sugar can be kept in check by the assistance of the organisation, mainly individual is responsible to ensure that their food has proper nutrients value and sugar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Though
... be taken as per our body requirements. though, the consumption of sugar can be kept i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04322766571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77752095601 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9383273099 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285194124037 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935752311614 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513610865066 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183212024769 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131479625975 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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