Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
In my perspective, lending money to scroungers is something which can be encouraged as a society. But there are certainly other factors. Where the cash goes ? will it suffice the needy? These are some questions that need an answer before we start doing such act. if the beggar drives on his own and takes care of his earnings, which is the money that he gets through begging, then the act can be welcomed. In another point of view, what if he is driven by some boss who cruelly punishes the person to gain some money and lives on those earnings.
there are many such things still happening in our society. we also cannot go further and investigate what the person does with his money. so, what is the solution? we can buy a meal or dish for the person because doing such makes us ensure that the food is serving the person in some way thereby eliminating his hunger for a limited point of time.
Let's consider the contrasting scenario as well. if all the members of an area decide to not to encourage beggars, what will be their state? some will die starving, some will end up in stealing and other threatening activities, some will even tend to commit suicide or murder anyone who has wealth that serves them. so, it's up to us to decide whether such acts must be triggered.
we must also think in the beggar's point of view because this job is not something he worked hard and got into. Due to certain circumstances or any other financial crisis, they might be forced to do such things. Not all the people in the world are born with a silver spoon. many are poor. some will work hard and rise up through education and hard work, some won't be supported by their family for studies and continue working as labour or a daily wage. At some point of time they may experience illness for which no support is obtained from family or friends. so, the poor people choose this profession hoping for at least some life until their death.
Finally, as a participant of the society which involves a mix up of individuals ranging from people below the line of poverty to above the line , we can think of contributing in some way or other to the ones who seek help or money from us in a more pleasing way. atleast we must take some time to look at their faces which will tell a thousand stories of how they ended up here.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4262295082 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29715992576 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.7689537984 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240208679601 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574790393364 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460985034815 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132169414607 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524109229904 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.