Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself to tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.
Dear Nicol,
it is a great idea being penfriend, hopefully, we'll meet up someday.
I want to tell you about myself, my name is Sharon and I'm living in Tel-Aviv. I'm 30 years old and I've daughter, my profession is librarian. I like this profession a lot even though in the last years I'm at home cause I want to spend more time with my family. I find it very fun to spend time with people who I immensely love and care all thought it means working around the clock.
we do many things together like travel to far cities like Jerusalem and Haifa as well as visit new places like Science museum in Haifa or recently we visited the old city in Jerusalem, which very interesting place.
Besides travelling, we also enjoy going to the beach even in the winter or playing with other kids in the Jamberry especially when a rainy day. when the sun is shining we spend time in the back yard near our apartment, but not if the weather is too hot then we 're staying at home and doing other things, like cooking food, painting colorful paint or reading and learning.
we like being at home, today we 've planned to back a carrot cake, we probably will bake it as soon as I'll finish writing this letter.
I would love to hear from you, what your interests and how you spend free time? writing each other can be fun and I've enjoyed write to you, hopefully, we continue keeping in touch with you, if you have a plan coming to visite Israel please let me know.
Yours,
Sharon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you about myself, my name is Sharon and Im living in Tel-Aviv. Im 30 years old and...
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Suggestion: I'm
...me is Sharon and Im living in Tel-Aviv. Im 30 years old and Ive daughter, my profe...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...living in Tel-Aviv. Im 30 years old and Ive daughter, my profession is librarian. I...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ion a lot even though in the last years Im at home cause I want to spend more time...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'funs'?
Suggestion: funs
...ore time with my family. I find it very fun to spend time with people who I immense...
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Suggestion: We
...t it means working around the clock. we do many things together like travel to ...
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Suggestion: When
...e Jamberry especially when a rainy day. when the sun is shining we spend time in the...
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Suggestion: We
...olorful paint or reading and learning. we like being at home, today we ve planned...
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Suggestion: Writing
... interests and how you spend free time? writing each other can be fun and Ive enjoyed w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...time? writing each other can be fun and Ive enjoyed write to you, hopefully, we con...
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Line 15, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e Israel please let me know. Yours, Sharon
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase let me know. Yours, Sharon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22554367023 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7859027419 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202983241897 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696237216053 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815603583445 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920410205838 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823874144848 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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